Wednesday 19 December 2012

EVALUATION Questions

Question 1. In what ways does your media product use, develop and challenge forms and conventions of real media products?


One way that I have used R&B music video conventions in my own music video is the washed colour effect we have put on our video. We did this by turning the saturation down on each clip in final cut express. Below you can see a shot from our video with the saturation turned down, and some screen shots from other R&B videos that use this convention. The Drake and Rihanna video uses washed colour, whereas the Nicki Minaj has a complete black and white colour wash. My video is not fully washed to black and white, as we liked the colour on the artists hat and did not want it to be too dull. We have done this as bright colours often connote a happy bubbly atmosphere, usually used in the Pop genre. Due to us wanting a more downbeat/dingey feel to the video, to represent the idea of the artists struggle to success being a dark down time in their life. This is why we turned the saturation down to create washed colour.


















Another convention I have used in my media video is the performance/narrative that run along side of each other in the video. In our video we have the artist standing in a warehouse for the performance bit, he is singing the song in these shots. On the other hand, for the narrative we have a story of a girl who is struggling to get where she wants to be, this is shown by her crying and arguing with her mother at the beginning, she then makes her way to the dance studio and uses her dancing as an outlet. We show this cross cutting between the narrative and performance with split screens which added an effect of showing what the singer is talking about at one specific time, this also links back to the struggle and the pain as one shot is one of her showing pain, and the other is her or the artist performing. Our split screens are shown below. Also we used cross and additive dissolves between shots of our artist and the character dancing in the video.
From my research and planning I found out that other R&B artists do this narrative/performance style video. Below are screen shots from my video showing how I used this convention, and there are also shots from other existing R&B videos such as The Script who have a similar story line to us
From my research and planning I found out that other R&B artists do this narrative/performance style video. Below are screen shots from my video showing how I used this convention















Screen shots of split screens



And here are shots from other existing R&B videos such as The Script who have a similar story line to us with the same theme of cross cutting between the narrative and the performance, shown in the shots below.















One convention I have developed in my media video is the artists clothing. Usually in a R&B video the artist is usually dressed smart, or in a very casual way. The smart dress connotes wealth and that they are successful, although some artists like to stick to their urban roots and dress in a more casual style. We challanged this by combining both these conventions together as we had out artist in a smart jacket, with a hoodie underneath, instantly making the outfit more urban. We did this to show that our artist is down to earth and relatable, but still has a sense of class about him.
Below are pictures of other artist showing both dress code conventions, and our artist representing the combination of the two.
































A second convention I have developed in my R&B music video is our location for the performance side of our video. We used an old abandoned warehouse to film the shots with our artist. Using a grungey background location is a popular thing in the R&B genre, as for the same reason as us, the artists want to portray the struggle to fame. Rihanna uses this convention in We Found Love, and Chris Brown uses it in Don't Judge Me























In these screen shots you can see how we have developed the grunge location theme as the locations in these existing R&B videos are in rough looking places, but they look as if they are used by people. On the other hand, our location is very remote and completely empty. This made filming here very easy as there was no background noise, no people and nothing to distract us. The reason we decided to have this urban location featured so strongly in our media video as it is to show our artist going back to his 'urban roots' which is what the lyrics of our song are representing. We also knew that we could get some interesting shots in this location as the warehouse is very run down, we could get graffiti in the back ground and broken glass on the floor. Due to the wide open space we could also get some high shots, low shots and were able to make a spinning shot of the artist for the chorus which turned out really well.



A convention that we challenged in our media video is the typical love storyline that features in a lot of R&B music videos. This is usually due to the lyrics usually being about love. We decided to focus more on the struggle to fame theme in our video. Again, this is due to the link with the lyrics we have in our song saying 'the money is the motive' we decided to represent working towards getting where you want in life. I believe that this is effective, as it is not the typical storyline of a video, and we have made something a bit different meaning it would be interesting to our target audience to see something different. Below are some pictures showing the typical love story convention in a lot of R&B music videos.




Another convention we challenged is the girl in our narrative part of the video. This has been developed as usually, in R&B music videos with the narrative and performance running along side each other with cross cuts between, older actresses/actors are used. As our story line is similar to that of a proffesional R&B video, we have challanged this by the fact that we use a young school girl as our character for the video. This part of the video runs parralel to the performance part representing our artists journey, which she is now going through. We created a contrast between our artist, and the girl in the narrative, showing anyone can find success if they just try hard enough.  Also we have not used an element of desire in our video, as most R&B videos have a girl portrayed as 'sexy' as this is a typical convention of this genre. We have not represented Phoebe as this at all.


 
One video that shows we challanged this is Tre Songs in 'Simply Amazing' as in the narrative he uses an older looking girl. This is shown in the picture below
 




Question 2. How effective us the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
For this question, we spoke about how our three texts linked and we recorded it on an IPhone 5, we then uploaded the recording to our mac, and edited it on top of parts of the video, and pictures that backed up what we were saying in the recording. Here is that video.




Question 3. What have you learnt from your audience feedback?
Here is an annotated version of our video answering this question.




Question 4. How did you use media technologies in the  construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?
This is footage of my evaluation question explaining how I used technologies creating my media product.

Saturday 15 December 2012

Our magazine advert

This is our final edited magazine advert for Joseph SoMo we edited it in photoshop adding other pictures and barcodes from google. We then put all the text in place and added the colours that fit our other texts.

Final digipack pictures

These are our final digipack pictures, we have a front cover, back cover and four inlays which make up our CD album digipack. We edited all these pictures on photoshop, changing the saturation of them to follow the theme of our video meaning all three texts follow the same colour scheme. We also added text to our images with the text box tool, this included track lists, album titles and thanks. Here are our completed picture







Friday 14 December 2012

Filming

Below are pictures of us filming our artist Joseph SoMo. The pictures show us using the equipment, the location and costume of our artist.

Wednesday 12 December 2012

Audience feedback

We showed our final music video in our school assembly which had an age group of 17-19 which fit perfectly into our target audience bracket. Some of the feedback was very interesting and helpful. The questions we asked and response is shown below.

Does the song relate to the visuals of the video?
-Yes, it is emotional
-Not really the visuals do not realy fit the lyrics
-Yes
-No it wasnt about money
-Yes simple but effective
-Yes song goes with the video
-Yes hard ballet dancer working hard, always practising
-Yes the lyrics relate to the situation she is in
-Yes the girl is trying to dance even though she is troubled
-Yes the words match the visuals

What impressions do you get of our artist ?
-He is determined
-That he had a struggle, lots of emotion
-That he is motivated by money
-That has had a hard life
-Hardcore because of the set
-Gangster
-A very personal performance
-Has been though the problems that the song is about
-Calm collected
-Meaningfull

How far is the video an R&B?
-Very
-Looks like an authentic R&B video
-It is quite representative of R&B
-Its very "street"
-Yes very especially the clothes he is wearing
-Yes very typical r&b lay out
-Not really
-Very, fits the classical charachteristics of an R&B videos
-Similar to typical R&B videos
-A little bit
-Not really

Do you have any criticism?
-Maybe a change is needed when the music tempo picks up
-I dont really understand why the girl was doing ballet
-Story of the video isnt to clear
-Could be a bit more upbeat
-No, its great
-No
-The video doesnt fit the lyrics
-Better lighting
-Could link a bit better with the video
-No it was very well put together

This is very helpful for us as we gain what we did right, and what we did wrong in the process of making our video. This will be helpful for my analysis.

Our finished video!



This is our final video which is fully edited and exported in HD. I am very pleased with the final outcome, hope you enjoy!

Tuesday 11 December 2012

Changes from our rough cut video

Due to issues with lip sync, and comments we got from viewers, we decided to make many changes to the video. For example, we added in split screens in some of our shots showing him on one half and her on the other, this was effective as it shows synesthsia. This gives the audience the opportunity to relate the lyrics with what is happening in the video.



We also went through and made sure all our shots were in time with the video and where we wanted, our video now looks more professional.

Progress post

Today we have finished editing our front cover, back cover, inlays and advert for our artist. We have washed the colour and added text such as the title of the album and track lists.

Digi pack pictures (Rough copys/Unedited)

Here are all the pictures we have taken so far of our artist Joseph SoMo for our Digi pack and Inlay pictures. These are the rough copys as we havent chosen which ones we are going to use yet and we havent started editing.
 
We plan to use this picture for the back cover as there is a good amount of space above and around the artist to put text with his name, album name and track list. We like this picture as it looks as if he is looking up at the text, involving him with it.




These pictures are going to be edited and put in the inlay of our digipack.

Tuesday 27 November 2012

Rough cut of our video



This is our rough cut of our music video. A lot of the clips are out of time as the footage moved slightly before we exported. I have now changed this on our actual video on Final Cut Express and the timings are all correct. We also decided that some of the shots in our video were too long/dragged on therefore we decided to add some split screens in between him performing, and the narrative of her dancing. We have used particular shots of the dancer showing pain, such as her holding her foot in pain, and a shot of her crying, these are put in a split screen with shots of her dancing and shots of the artist singing. This adds another element to our music video and makes it more interesting.
Apart from these obvious problems with the video, and the fact that the quality we exported it in isn't as clear as we hoped, I am very happy with how our video is looking such as the washed out colour we have included in this rough cut.

Friday 23 November 2012

Washed out effect

We firstly decided to use black and white for our music video, therefore I have analysed a few black and white music videos to look at the micro elements. We have recently decided to change this to using a washed out effect rather than full black and white. This is due to us not wanting our piece to look too boring. Also we have some nice colours such as the artists yellow hat, so we decided to just wash the colours rather than do full black and white. Here are some examples of the washed colour effect.